For my peer reviewers:
I like the flow of the first half of my letter. This half is concerned with my "writing story." However, the second half of the letter seems to be a bit choppy and unnatural. I also think it could use some more evidence. Please comment where you think it sounds boring/choppy/awkward. Also be sure to let me know if there is a spot where some more evidence would support what I am saying.
To read and comment on my draft click here.
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