Identifying Basic Grammar Patterns

This exercise was interesting. I was not conscious of how my sentence pattern's variation (or lack thereof). Something that was difficult for me was determining subordinate versus independent clauses. I would like to work more on that. I was surprised, actually, because my sentence purposes varied a lot, while their structure did not. I think it is important for me to try and vary my sentence structure while maintaining the different sentence purposes. Read my annotated paragraph here.